Wednesday 7 August 2013

Tortoise Soup Chapter 1 - 4


                                      
 Where is Goat?                                      


One morning Tortoise crawled out of his hole and went to the river for a drink. He saw his friends, Raven and Rat, waiting there with unhappy faces.
 "What's wrong?" said Tortoise? 
"Goat's late," answered Rat.
"Goat is never late," said Tortoise.
"I'll go up in the sky and see if I can see him," said Raven. 
"We'll stay here," said Tortoise and Rat.




TO THE RESCUE!
 Once Tortoise, Rat, and Raven had left the riverbank, Rat and Raven took flight. One thing that was crazy was that rat was riding Raven like horse! Suddenly Rat could see something in a net. So Raven glided down to check it and saw that it was goat! He had been caught in a hunter's net! Rat quickly gnawed through the net and set goat free. Next minute tortoise was puffing beside them.
"Oh Tortoise you shouldn't be here it is not safe!"

 Goat, Raven and Rat ran but Tortoise couldn't keep up with them...and the hunter caught him and put him in his hunting bag. 


          Goat Gets Away           


The hunter found that the goat was gone and his net was ruined. Rat and Raven quickly escaped from the hunter. The hunter decided to eat tortoise soup instead. He thought that tortoise soup would be good to eat. Goat made a plan to rescue tortoise...    


Tortoise Soup

Goat had an idea!
Goat would lead the hunter away from tortoise who was trapped in the hunter's bag.
Goat raced towards the hunter and she hobbled in front of him. The hunter said, " There's that goat and she's hurt. Now I can catch her easily."
Rat was biting the rope on the hunter's bag, then tortoise was free as a bee! When the hunter came back he saw the bag was empty.
"Oh no! No tortoise soup and no goat either!" said the hunter. 
The next day at the river goat and tortoise said to the Rat and Raven, "Thank-you for saving us!"

 Rat and Raven said, "Good friends always help each other."




2 comments:

  1. Hi Room 1,
    AWESOME story! I absolutely love how you included chapters in your story. I would like to know who WROTE the story?
    Holly

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  2. Hello Holly,
    It was written by Dawn McMillan. I liked the story too because they save each other.
    From Poppy at Waihola District School.

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